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Post by [.___Paije] ! on Jun 17, 2009 18:12:36 GMT -5
Name | Tallwhisker
Gender | She-cat
Age | Thirty-six moons
Rank | Warrior
Clan | FogClan
Beliefs| Tallwhisker is a firm believer in StarClan. Ever since early kithood she's been taught: if you're bad you're going to "cat hell". She's a very...strong believer. Very into StarClan and worship of them. She never allows herself to eat prey before thanking StarClan for the food that supplies her energy. She doesn't have anything against non-believers. But she slightly resents them in a way. But she will not force religion onto other cats. They can believe in what they feel like believing in, for all she could care. As long as she herself has a strong belief in StarClan installed inside of her head, she's fine.
Parents | Ternclaw(father; np), Bitternheart(mother; np)
Siblings | Only child
Other Kin | Unknown
Mate | Not yet
Crush | Not yet. ;D
Kits | Nup. :c
Apprentice/Mentor | Not yetttt
Appearance | Tallwhisker, like the prefix shows--she's a tall cat. Her legs making up the majority of her height. Most of her pelt is made out of thick hairs of white and grey. Mainly her upper part--such as the eyes and above are sort of...masked by grey. Along with the ears, back of the head, back, and the top part of her tail. Her pelt is mainly made for winter-like conditions. In the summer she feels a slight bit of over-humidity. Which is bearable--but at times quite annoying. It's convenient during winter, but during summer it's just plain out annoying at times. Especially those humid, hot days. Which is when she'll try to avoid some work and stay in the shade. Which is slightly reasonable, yes?
Personality | She's a pretty level-headed cat. She doesn't seem to get angered that often. But when angered, she mainly stays to herself, wanting not to take her anger out on anyone else. Always afraid of what other cats think of her; which makes her slightly reluctant to going and talking around other cats. But she keeps to her little "group" of friends. She absolutely adores kits. She's always wanted to become a mother herself--but in more ways she'd want to still be serving her Clan. But to look at it in a different way; she is serving her Clan if she ever had kits. By supplying new apprentices and kits to keep the Clan running. Which is always a good thing. But either way; it's helping her Clan. But she herself would be really torn between the Warrior's den and the nursery.
Skills | Like her suffix says, she's a pretty good hunter. But that's not all that she can do. She's a pretty level-headed cat that can give advice to apprentices in need, or even a warrior that needs someone to vent to. She also is an all-right cat as a leader. She knows how to order some cats around, definitely.
History | Scrambling over her father's back onto his head--to see the starry sky more clearly. "Daddy?" Ternclaw chuckled, "Yes?" "What is up there?" Tallkit asked curiously, eyes growing wide at the sight of the twinkling stars up in silverpelt. Ternclaw grinned widely. Finally, his only daughter asking about StarClan. Thank StarClan! It's finally time to tell her all about them... "Well, Tallkit. Up there is StarClan. All good cats that pass-over go up there. They watch over us and when we pass-over then hopefully a loved one up there will guide us up there...see, they live in those stars. It just shows how bright they shine as they watch us." her father purred, nodding lightly. Tallkit's eyes stretched wide, before keeping a hold of her father's head. "Wh-what happens to all the bad cats?" she asked curiously. "...I'd like to not speak of it. Just be a good cat and you'll never have to find out, all right? You're a good kit. You'll definitely end up in StarClan...with your mother and I when we pass..." he mumbled, staring up at silverpelt again, before closing his eyes. Pondering it all together. While Tallkit continued to stare at the stars. Fascinated. StarClan...really? I wonder how they shine so bright... she pondered, eyes still wide.
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Post by Rolo on Jul 13, 2009 14:56:10 GMT -5
A little more is needed for her personality. I don't really understand what she is like. What drives her? What are her strengths and faults? How does her beliefs play out in her every day life.
Your history is a cute little story, however it doesn't tell you much about how she grew up. We need to know where she lived, how she learnt to hunt and grew to be how she is to day, how she came to find the clans and her relationships with her parents.
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