Fawleaf's Application

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• Name/ Fawnleaf
  
• Gender/ She-cat
  
• Age/ 15 moons
  
• Rank/ Queen
  
• Clan/ FogClan
  
• Beliefs/ She has always strictly believed in StarClan ever since she had a dream about dead forest cats- that's how she knew she was meant to come to the clans.
  
• Parents/ Jay and Petal(NP)
  
• Siblings/ Twinkle (NP)
  
• Other kin/ None
  
• Mate/ Not yet
  
• Crush/ None
  
• Kits/ Not yet (Expecting)
  
• Apprentice/ Not yet
  
• Appearance/ She has very long, bright orange and white splattered fur. Her fur is extremely puffy and soft. She has short ears with a light pink nose, and dark green eyes. She is an average sized she-cat, but has unusually small paws.
  
• Personality/ Very kindhearted, but she has a sharp tongue when she is annoyed or angry. She will help any cat in need, even if they are from a different clan. Often accused of being too soft on kittypets, since her whole family came from a line of kittypets. She is very quiet, and will not speak her true feelings to anybody.
  
• Skills/ Swift and limber, can sneak up on any approaching foe.
  
• History/ Fawnleaf was born as a kittypet, under the name Crystal. Her family was well fed and rarely neglected by the twolegs, but somehow Crystal didn't feel in place. After Crystal was about eight moons old, the twolegs moved away and left her parents, Twinkle and her. They all agreed to stay together as a family, until Twinkle became gravely ill with greencough. Crystal was told to go find a better place to live. So Crystal became a loner, and wandered the forest alone. Then one night as she slept under a willow tree, she had a dream about starry cats who claimed they came from the forest. They talked about the clans and how they worked, and Crystal knew that's where she was meant to be. So she went off to find the clans, every night having another dream about the clans. On the way she met another loner named Storm, who agreed to travel with her to the clans. He gave her much useful advice, and after a few moons of traveling, they fell in love. Now Crystal is expecting kits, and they are almost to the clan territory. But a badger has followed them to they're resting place, and Storm had to fight it. Storm was quickly crushed and killed by the badger, and Crystal was forced to flee. After another moon of wandering, she finally arrived at the clans. When she arrived, she earned the name Fawnleaf for her gentleness. She will have her kits soon, and is in need of a good mate in the clans.
  Please let Fawnleaf join FogClan!
  

[Crowzerplorodon]

Alright, name first.
How does a cat use their leaf, act like a leaf, or have a leaf?

We have minimums for each section, which aren't met in any of your sections except history.

Appearance: go into detail on her size. explain what type of build she has. talk about head shape, paw size, tail length, things like that. then explain what her fur looks like in length and color. finally end with the little things, eyes and whiskers and whatnot.

Personality: her personality is all over the place. she's kind by can be snappy? quiet because of once being a kittypet? there are some once-kittypets in the clan, you know. branch off on how she interacts with other cats. what her opinions are and how she defends them.

History: it fits, it really does. but i just want to check. have you read the plot here at Forest of Fate? She wouldn't be tormented in any way for once being a kittypet. Especially if she was a loner before even coming in the clans. Also, for the kits, you're going to have to pm me with your plans for them.

Beliefs: just a little more fleshing out would be good.