Pebblepaw;; The Believer

[pajamas]

-see rankings-

Pebblepaw wants to be a meddie.

[Crowzerplorodon]

Ok, the application can be described in one word. Lacking.


It would be nice if you fleshed out and went into a lot more detail on practically everying. Description, personality, and history being the big ones. It would also be nice to have parent names, even if they aren't played.

Now, Shade- isn't fitting her description from what I could tell. Either describe it a lot better or get a picture. Remember, this is traditional, which means she would not be named Shadepaw because of her old rogue name. I mean, Jaypaw (my cat) is not named Sampaw, is he?

Once you have a better description or picture then we can see if Shade- matches.

[pajamas]

Okay, I'll give you Shadepaw's image.
s697.photobucket.com/albums/vv333/rendye/cats/Shade/
Shadepaw is real. :P
Hmph. I don't know what to add to apearance, though. D:

[Crowzerplorodon]

Ok, that is good enough for Shade-. Try describing her size, her tail, her eyes color. Go into detail on her fur pattern. And put the best picture up, please.

Also, personality and history still need some work.

[pajamas]

Okay, I'll get to work.
*takes measuring tape outside*
I'll take note of EVERYTHING! xD