miley makes me frown

[Ten]

So I'm working on a poem...

Seven Things I Hate About You

I know I shouldn't say,
seeing as I'm so mad,
in what indignant way
I view your little fad.

While you were never impressive,
it's not possible for me not to care,
not possible for me not to be aggressive
in telling you how you and your fake hair
cause me woe. I want you to know

the seven things I hate about you.
You're spineless. Your merchandise. You intended the photos to come off as "artsy".
You think it's okay to persue a relationship with an abusive boyfriend
just because of his hair, his eyes, and his old Levis.

You think it's okay because you like the hormone rush,
and therefore, it must be true love.

You think that a boy who can influence your emotions must be infallible.
He can make you feel this or that, so he must be acceptable, right?
Because after all, no one has ever used pathos to steer someone wrong, right?
Just ask a historian about the Nazis.

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i love you.

[» s a b ø r ]]

i love it. :3

[Ten]

's lame how I had a rhyme scheme and then ditched it in the middle there

but yay, love.

[glowlynose]

Ahaha, that made me chuckle.

[topaz]

I love it..but sometimes the word doesn't fit the melody(rythom) properly...or is it me that is singing it weird??

[moonlight]

I sang it to the tune of 'I've been working on the railroad.'
It's better with a sort of STRESS stress STRESS stress sort of beat to it.

[Ten]

"sometimes the word doesn't fit the melody(rythom) properly"
--
I ditched all of that after the first few verses. It's not meant to be sung.

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