Warriors Rewrite?

[[ hardyrex ]]

Or if Graystripe didn't get caught....or Yellowfang didn't join ThunderClan, or Tigerstar wasn't killed, or Tigerstar was good and Firestar wasn't. O:

[Rolo]

I think we should do it without Firepaw. That way we could develop all the other characters, perhaps do it from Graystripe's point of view...

Of the Tigerstar being good could be interesting ;P We could do that.

[firε]

Sept 12, 2009 8:04:39 GMT -5 Rolo said:

That's an idea... we could have an alternate universe story where Firepaw decided not to join the clan. It could be really interesting... watching the actual warriors deal with things themselves and decide their own fate ;P

Maybe Smudge would join TClan instead lol. xDDDD
You could do tons of things with it: Like ThunderClan being the bad Clan, the Clans never having to leave the forest, SkyClan never leaving, Tigerclaw actually having a relationship with Bluestar (LOL), etc.

[Ten]

"Tigerstar was good and Firestar wasn't."
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Alternate character interpretation? Heck yes.

Bluestar is shown to have logic issues in Into the Wild. Perhaps Firepaw construed the events to make it seem like he himself was the good guy, but in reality, Tigerclaw is just trying to rescue the Clan from a senile leader and a psychopathic kittypet.

[[ hardyrex ]]

Sept 13, 2009 15:03:46 GMT -5 Ten said:

"Tigerstar was good and Firestar wasn't."
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Alternate character interpretation? Heck yes.

Bluestar is shown to have logic issues in Into the Wild. Perhaps Firepaw construed the events to make it seem like he himself was the good guy, but in reality, Tigerclaw is just trying to rescue the Clan from a senile leader and a psychopathic kittypet.

So Tigerstar will be basically the only character who gets a personality change. o:

[Rolo]

Yesyes, I wanna do that!

Firepaw is seen as good only because Bluestar favours him. Bluestar dotes on him, giving him praise and raising him up on a pedistal because she's becoming weaker in mind and she becomes obsessed with the prophecy. However, Tigerclaw sees through this nonsense, and sees this kitty-pet's ridiculous flaunting of the rules for what it really is.

*Now finding herself plotting out the whole thing *

[hayy]

Alternate character interpretation? Heck yes.

Bluestar is shown to have logic issues in Into the Wild. Perhaps Firepaw construed the events to make it seem like he himself was the good guy, but in reality, Tigerclaw is just trying to rescue the Clan from a senile leader and a psychopathic kittypet.

Epic win.
It would have to start at the beginning of the series, but perhaps we could use some of the Erins' actual writing? Or we could totally re-write it, but it might be fun to see how little we would have to change to totally flip it.

Where would Greystripe stand, then?
Would he also be deluded by Firepaw?

[Rolo]

Start at the beginning, methinks. Build up the image gradually.

I think we should have it from Tigerstar's point of view.

I believe that we should have Greystripe as a deluded friend, he made friends with the apprentice when he joined the clan and he is taken in with Firepaw's reasoning for breaking the rules and getting Ravenpaw away.

[Ten]

Yes, like the majority of the Clan, Graypaw is hypnotized. And a Tigerclaw POV sounds good. We'll have to give him an actual personality, though. Ideas on that?

My Suggestions:

- StarClan = nonexistant
- Spottedleaf = slut
- Tigerclaw didn't kill Redtail; Ravenpaw framed him (though why, we'll have to figure out)
- ShadowClan isn't trying to take over the forest. Perhaps instead they're trying to convince the other Clans that StarClan isn't real (because it isn't).

[hayy]

Group C-box Ideas--The Transcript:
-Greystripe is deluded by Fireheart
-Dustpaw does not fall for Fireheart, Sandpaw does
-StarClan doesn't exist
-Fireheart doesn't love Sandpaw (but might take her anyways)
-Spottedleaf is a slut, or somehow not some perfect Med Cat that loves Fireheart
-The dogs actually come through
-Tigerclaw dies a tragic hero
-Tigerclaw joins ShadowClan and wipes out Thunderclan (methinks this is too......I dunno)
-Sandpaw doesn't fall for Fireheart

AND A BIG QUESTION:
Do we just twist the events of the books to show how they could work our way, do we totally re-write everything, or do we twist the events for the first couple books or however long and then branch into a totally different ending (maybe once it gets to the point that Tigerclaw being a sane, good individual could not act as the Erin's have him acting)?