COMMENT THREAD!

[Crowzerplorodon]

Is there a drabble you really, really like? Well, you can't comment on the author's post, but you can comment here. Specify the author and which drabble you're talking about, and then post your comment. Make sure to keep this area free of drama - staff can and will delete any drama-ridden post.

Below is a list of current entries.

Nightfall's
Pyro's
Slug's
Glowy's
Cloudie's

[Slug]

Drabble Owner: Nightfall
Which Drabble?: First entry
Slug's Comment: Loved your drabble, Night'z. <3 It was perfect for prompt #68: Soul Mate, in my opinion. ^.^ Really liked the omen part. .3. It kinda made me wary of true love, because after I read your drabble, I sat there for a few seconds thinking "Ho'snap. o.O". >.> xD -thumbs up-

[glowlynose]

Slug: I'm not sure if you meant for this to happen, but your drabble with Snowflower when he's talking about Crowpaw has only made me even more determined to make sure that he stays a "pristine" cat no matter what. WHAT DOES IT MEAN? D:
It's confusing me endlessly. "Silver tarnishes over time." What's that supposed to mean? ;-;
I think that once he's made, they should meet.

Also, I absolutely love your drabbles about Willowpaw to death. Crowpaw should befriend him. Seriously.

[Slug]

Response and Comment to GLOWY

First off, I want to say that your first entry about Swallowpelt of PineClan, and Crowpaw of PineClan, brought some tears into my eyes. Especially the first part of your drabble. It was just... HSADS. It was... almost dark. Just a little.

"It is purely up to a mother to make sure that her children grow into something good. But what if the mother isn't something good herself? What if the mother is broken, not whole anymore? Then what happens to the young ones?"

BAM. I immediately began to worry about the kits-- like a mother. What would happen to them? Good? Bad? Nothing? It drove me crazy just thinking about it.

"A mother and her offspring can sometimes switch places. Children become the nurturers, the mother becomes the cared for. That is a thing of beauty. It expresses truly unconditional love."

And then I began to feel some relief. Just a little. But then the ending-- such a sweet ending-- really warmed my heart.

"Thank you, young one, for being the sunshine in my day; although at times it might seem to you like the darkness overshadowing me will never leave, you make it do just that."

Let the squeeing ensue. xD /shot'd/

And, as for your question...

Your question: "Silver tarnishes over time." What's that supposed to mean? ;-;

My answer: Snowflower was relating Crowpaw to silver, which means that he was implying that Crowpaw can't stay pure forever. xD' Silver tarnishes over time, and sooo... Crowpaw looses his, like, goodness. Sooner or later, Snowflower doesn't know. But he believes that Crowpaw will. Some day. Snowflower is, in a way, can't stand seeing Crowpaw be so good, because Crowpaw, in a sense, is more beautiful than Snowflower. Snowflower is (well, he thinks so) a beautiful cat on the outside, but his personality is ugly. Crowpaw has a beautiful personality and is cute, which really bruises Snowflower's ego. xD

Hope that helped! ^.^

[green ! [old ghost]]

*hoping it works like this*

author: slug
drabble: 32, storm
comment: i just wanna say, this is one of the most adorable things i've read in a long, long time. i don't know the character but i love how you captured a scene of his characterization (especially one from the past) in just a few words! i really wish i could capture how much i loved this drabble in a few words. <333 the last line was extremely great as well. it like... summed up everything while continuing on the story. i adore it. :3

[Whiskers]

Author: slug
Drabble: all of them
Comment: Okay, Slug, I really can't... just choose one drabble to talk about because I seriously love each and every one of them. I'll tell you a few of my favorites, how about that? xD

#5:Window-- this is probably the drabble which blew my mind first. The other four that preceded it were fabulous of course, but when I read this one, I just fell back in my chair and stared at my screen. It's such an inventive similie, truly very creative. I would have never thought of that. This drabble had me going "This girl has got some serious talent."

#13:Reflective-- ...gaaaaah. xD That last line, Slug! I wish I had written such a beautiful, thought-provoking...poetic line. That's something I'll quote you on, over and over, throughout my whole life.

#14: Pristine-- Another wonderful metaphor! How do you come up with these things, Slug? And it made me think about Crowpaw's future and how he'll change. 'Course, Glowy says he'll always stay the way he is, but I'm still going to watch him carefully...:3 this drabble was awesome.

#18: Shamrock-- you know how much I loved this one? I loved it so much that I wanted to use that idea for a story myself. xD That a character ate a four leaf clover and got lucky. I just found it so odd and so clever. I want your braaain slug. I want ittt.

#27: Clouds-- Adorable, adorable, and not only because Crowpaw was in it. I loved Bluefur too and all his comments. xD Made me laugh. Again, how do you do this?!

#28: Petal-- Your ability to put something beautiful and profound into just a few words is astonishing. That's all I have to say

Okay, so those are my favorites right now. Keep writing Slug. I can't wait to see you write all the rest of them.

[|| allie]

author: hardy
drabble: imagination.
comment: daaaaamn, girl. that's intense. o: but i thought rabbitstep's life would be like that...? unless... nevermind, i'm confused.

ENLIGHTEN ME.

[glowlynose]

Okay. Slug. I must say this.

All of your drabbles, like, over the past 2 or 3 days... they're amazing. Mind. Blown.
I wish I could write drabbles like youuuuuuu.

The ones about Willowpaw in particular, they always get to me. I don't know why. Maybe they remind me of someone... I dunno. I guess in a way they almost remind me of myself when... things get to me. Or maybe I see Colleen, or Jay in them. Maybe all three. All I know is that your Willowpaw drabbles are effecting me on a much more profound level than I would have ever expected.

I really liked that last Crowpaw drabble of yours as well. I think it's the closest you've managed to come to the true spirit of Crowpaw, really ever. The others were cute, sure, and showed his innocence excellently, but this one... it's really him. It's really me. I have no idea how you managed to get him so right, but it's amazing.

I love your drabbles. I think you should continue them even after the contest ends. You're just amazing, and I mean that perfectly sincerely. <3

[May]

Drabble Owner: Cloudie
Drabble: Prompt 7, The Tree
Comment: YOU QUOTED PotC2! I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE! <3 This why I love you. xD

[Cloud of Diamonds]

XD Thanks. Actually, it was unintentional, though I do know which line you mean. Trust Loki to be like Jack Sparrow, though they are actually a tiny bit similar.