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Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 2, 2009 14:57:44 GMT -5

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Post by Rolo on Apr 2, 2009 14:57:44 GMT -5

vandonovan.livejournal.com/1088311.html

It's x-rated... it describes body parts, so be full warned. If you dare to read on (by clicking the link provided), it includes rape.

This is a prime example of how never to write. Ever. You will not believe what is on there... some of it is so honestly appauling. It makes the worst book you've ever read shakespeare. Seriously XD

A fantastic sentence to sum this thing up (and this was NOT an unusual one, the entire thing is written like this):
Her breasts were honey-combs and dew-beaded windows, or soft, sweet cheese.

Life's is too short to be working with divas ~ Richard O'brien

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 8, 2009 1:40:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2009 1:40:46 GMT -5 ... WAS I THE ONLY ONE THINKING "... So, she's made out of animal parts..."? ): My mind snapped... I-I-I... WHAT IS THIS STUFF? ;_; GIVE ME TWILIGHT. GIVE ME TWILIGHT. LET ME UNSNAP MY BRAIN.
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[ hardyrex ] Global Moderator Crow's Wife pantastic#0001 on discord Posts: 742	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 8, 2009 20:24:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by [ hardyrex ] on Apr 8, 2009 20:24:54 GMT -5 ... That's writing?

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 8, 2009 23:13:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2009 23:13:51 GMT -5 APPARENTLY, HARDY.

solo Guest	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 9, 2009 7:06:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by solo on Apr 9, 2009 7:06:49 GMT -5 Wow. I'm surprised that was published. He used all the words in the english dictionary just describing some chick. I like how her tongue is like a ferret. 0=3

pteriforever Guest	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 9, 2009 16:50:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by pteriforever on Apr 9, 2009 16:50:49 GMT -5 that's not writing. It's stupidity.

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 10, 2009 2:00:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2009 2:00:59 GMT -5 It's gibberish... I want to buy a copy...

[.___Paije] ! Full Member It's true... Posts: 176	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 10, 2009 22:18:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by [.___Paije] ! on Apr 10, 2009 22:18:18 GMT -5 I didn't find it too disturbing somehow. o3o;

xpounceofheartsx Guest	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 12, 2009 12:57:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by xpounceofheartsx on Apr 12, 2009 12:57:07 GMT -5 Gibberish

enterangel Guest	Silk and steel - How NEVER to write Apr 13, 2009 7:38:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by enterangel on Apr 13, 2009 7:38:17 GMT -5 "Her face had the fragrance of a gibbous moon." ... What. The. Hell? o.O

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