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Post by spider on Dec 30, 2010 21:51:59 GMT -5
Name | Hazelkit Hazelpaw
Gender | She-cat
Age | Six moons
Rank | Apprentice
Clan | StreamClan
Beliefs | Hazelpaw is a strong believer of StarClan, and dislikes PineClan solely for the fact that they don't think their warrior ancestors are real. She thinks they're bad cats to be around because of this disbelief, though wrongly so. Her belief in StarClan was planted by her father Thrushfoot, who had always believed in StarClan. When Thrushfoot's mate died, he believed she had gone to StarClan, and told his kits all about that. Hazelpaw is too young and immature to fully understand what's going on around her, though she is aware of the starvation and sickness falling onto her Clan.
Parents | Hazelpaw's father was Thrushfoot, a brown tabby tom with white paws and amber eyes. Her mother was Redstripe, a green eyed ginger she-cat with distinct darker ginger stripes down her tail. Her mother is dead, her father is still alive but not played.
Siblings | Hazelpaw has a sister named Kestrelpaw, a tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes. They are the only two kits in their parents' single litter. I will be making a biography for Kestrelpaw shortly.
Other Kin | Hazelpaw has no signifigant kin, besides her parents and sister.
Mate | Hazelpaw is too young to have a mate.
Crush | Hazelpaw isn't interested in any toms yet.
Kits | Hazelpaw's definitely too young to kit.
Mentor | Hazelpaw has no defined mentor yet.
Appearance | Hazelpaw, to describe her simply, is a small brown tabby she-cat with dark amber eyes. Her fur is short and glossy from eating fish as a kit, and it has grown water resistant so being wet doesn't slow her down as she swims. She has basic tabby features down her pelt and a dusty brown chest and underbelly, and is altogether a pretty cat.
She has narrow features to match her small, classic StreamClan frame. Her ears and muzzle are roundly pointed and her eyes are alive with life, giving her a clever appearance. Hazelpaw has well toned chest and leg muscles that she developed from swimming at a young age, as most apprentices do. Her legs are short but not stubby, and whatever height she lacks is made up for by a long, agile tail trailing behind her. Her paws are petite and stealthy, as StreamClan cats frequently train in tracking.
Personality | Hazelpaw has some interesting qualities. She is firm in her beliefs, making her stubborn and definitely hard to beat in an argument, even when she knows she's wrong. Her clever ways and StreamClan pride give her an edge, making her difficult to get along with (unless you grew up with her, like Kestrelpaw). She is street (or stream?) smart in some ways, though often breaks even the most common rules out of sheer curiosity, while her sister is more cautious. Hazelpaw is also known to be prejudiced at times, especially concerning her belief in StarClan. She dislikes anyone who disagrees with her, mostly because it makes her feel humiliated, and that's one emotion she hates. There are some good qualities to her, though. Hazelpaw stands up for what she believes and doesn't let others sway her. When she grows close to someone, she is loyal to them, though they may have their differences. She's a good cat, though inexperienced in the ways of warriors.
Skills | Hazelpaw is clever and stealthy, one of the big skills she picked up on throughout her kithood. It's customary for StreamClan cats to be sneaky like this. She's a good hunter as well, though fishing isn't her strong spot.
History | Hazelkit and Kestrelkit were born and raised to in StreamClan. While Hazelkit was the more adventurous of the two, her sister was more shy and subdued. Both were very close to each other, despite their differences. Their mother, Redstripe, died from blood loss shortly after the kitting and the two were given to another queen to be nursed. This queen's kits had died shortly after birth, though she still had plenty of milk. Thrushfoot, upset by his mate's death, became very close to his kits emotionally. He taught them a lot about StarClan, describing how Redstripe was their now, and painting pictures with his words so real that both kits became firm believers.
The two got in many adventures as kits, though that wasn't uncommon at the time. Hazelkit liked to wander camp whenever her adopted mother, a white she-cat named Cloudpelt, wasn't looking. Kestrelkit preferred to stay in the nursery warm and comfy with the other kits. This often caused disagreements between the two- they had different opinions of what they should and shouldn't do. For example, Hazelkit once managed to convince Kestrelkit to accompany her to an apprentice training session (secretly, of course). Though they were never found out watching the apprentices train, Kestrelkit was almost always uneasy after that.
The two were given their apprentice names recently- Hazelpaw and Kestrelpaw. [/sub][/blockquote][/justify][/size]
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Post by Pyro on Dec 30, 2010 23:57:10 GMT -5
I. How did Hazelpaw become such a strong believer in StarClan, when most StreamClan cats are pretty lax about beliefs? Was her father a strong believer? Did he teach his kits his beliefs?
Other than that, this app looks good. Her personality is brief, but it paints a nice picture of this cat. .3.
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Post by Pyro on Jan 1, 2011 21:14:12 GMT -5
Aaaaalll righty then. I'll contact an admin about that second opinion~
Welcome to FoF. .3. [1/2]
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