A Writer's Improvement (Hell whut?)

[maya]

This is basically just going to be some pieces of writing that I've done. I'll find random things and post them here.

So, for starters, I'll give you one of my vent stories that I did only a couple of months back:

I've lost who I am and I can't understand.

I sat there and listened to the endless drumming pounding through the empty halls. The waves flung their 'graceful' bodies into my ears causing them to sting; but I ignored it. I only continued to wonder what this had to do with anything. I continued to wonder who I was and what this had to do with me? I could feel that this drumming made something spark inside my brain but I couldn't understand why.

But I know all I know's that the end's beginning.

The drumming continued to beat itself through the many endless halls and their hallways. It continued to wander into my beat-up ears. I could feel my ears being ripped apart by the irritating sounds, but I continued to listen. My eyes blinked to the beat. They blinked faster than I ever thought they could. Until eventually, they started to slow.

Who I am from the start, take me home to my heart.

I could feel my flame slowly burning out. I could feel my emotions blocking it out; killing it. But I knew that this wasn't what I wanted. I pushed my hands against the hard, ruined floor beneath me, stood up and took one step forward. I wanted to see my family one last time. That was all I wanted to do. ...But my body was rejecting that feeling.

Let me go and I will run.

I didn't care how much pain it inflicted on by body, I continued to run; the drumming constantly ringing through my ears. My body pulled me back time and time again, but I continued running. All I did was run. I didn't try to look back - I didn't want to.

I will not be silent.

Eventually, my feet caught on a piece of debris and I tripped over; falling onto another sharp piece of rubble. Slicing through my arm, I tried not to shout out. ...But I did. I knew I wouldn't get out this place alive.

All this time spent in vain, wasted years, wasted gain.

Haaaaaaaaa. It fails. Sorry. :P