~Dawnpelt~

[Gemina]

Name | Dawnpelt

Gender | she-cat

Age | 22 moons

Rank | warrior

Clan | Pineclan

Beliefs |

Dawnpelt does not believe in Starclan, but she respects the other clans beliefs. She isn't strongly opposed to those who believe in Starclan, but she tries to avoid the topic as to not start any fights. Dawnpelt thinks that all cats should be loyal to their clan instead of relying on something that seems so unreal.

Parents | Father- Barktail (dead) Mother- Sootypelt (dead)

Siblings | Dawnpelt has no siblings

Other Kin | none

Mate |not yet

Crush |not yet

Kits |not yet

Apprentice/Mentor |not yet

Appearance |

Dawnpelt has a bright ginger pelt. Her face is a bit of a lighter ginger, as well as the stripes on her legs. She has a bit of white that's barely noticeable around her mouth, and a pretty pink nose. Her eyes are soft and amber. She has larger ears and her tail is a bit shorter than most cat's. Her fur is thick and rough from living her life in the forest. She's a bit on the larger side and has a lazy look overall. But she's still very strong and can keep up with the best.

Personality |

Dawnpelt is very protective of her clan mates and strives to help them however she can. She thinks everyone deserves fairness and justice. If she can't agree with someone she just doesn't say anything. If she ever needed to she would rush to her clan mate's side, seriously injuring anyone who tried to hurt them. However she has never, and never will kill another feline. She put's others before her self always and would gladly put herself at risk to do so.

Dawnpelt is very rational and thinks every problem can be solved with logic. She is a very strategic thinker and this can come in handy sometimes.

However Dawnpelt can be rather pessimistic and tends to see the glass as half empty instead of half full. She's not that cat to turn to if you need comforting, but, her skills for listening make her a great feline to just talk to. If your looking to get some comforting words out of it though, you should probably find someone else to let all your worries out on.

Dawnpelt may like helping the other cats a lot but she's also very found of being alone. If you disturb her when she's having her alone time, she won't be very happy with you. Of course she won't hurt you, just avoid you for a while. Dawnpelt can also get very grumpy sometimes, and a little mean (very rarely though). Sometimes it's best to just leave her alone. Dawnpelt is also a little impatient and she does get mad at you if your always bothering her.

Skills |

Dawnpelt is very quick - with her paws and her mind. She's a swift hunter, and has a good ming for strategy. However she tries her best not to use her skills for battle purposes.

Dawnpelt may have a skill for strategy but, she's not a great leader, mostly because she's impatient and wouldn't be able to handle the stress of it. Dawnpelt thinks she wouldn't make a very good mother either, but she's never had kits, so she's not sure.

History |

Dawnpelt was born into the life of a rogue. She was care-free and happy to play all day well her parents hunted for food. But Dawnpelt knew at an early age that life wasn't all fun and games. She could often be found listening to her father teach her about the ways of the forest. Even as a kit she was learning as much as she could. Her life as a kit passed by quickly, each day fading into the next.

Dawnpelt was apprentice aged when her parents joined up with Pineclan. They were all hard-working members of the clan and did their best to help out in every way that the could.
Then the accident happened. Dawnpelt's parents were out hunting when they were attacked by foxes and brutally killed. Their bodies weren't found tell a few weeks later. This greatly upset Dawnpelt and she did all she could to get away from the real world. In her many attempts to do this she learned many things of the world around her. When she was declared a warrior she decided to devote herself to protecting her clan from attackers and injustices. Dawnpelt really has the events of her past to thank for her fair and protective personality.

Now Dawnpelt lives peacefully in Pineclan. Just living a quiet life of hunting and helping others. Now and then she remembers her parents, and she smiles. If it weren't for them she would have never made her way in the world.

[Pyro]

Welcome to FoF. .3. This is very good for your first bio here. There's just a few things that need tweaking.

I. Here on FoF we like to keep things consistently traditional. 'Skyeyes', unfortunately, is not traditional. D:

II. Dawnpelt's personality needs to be balanced out a bit more: the positive traits outnumber the negative ones, but this is easy enough to fix with a little expansion. c:

III. Dawnpelt's skills are also unbalanced. She needs to have some weak points.

IV. Given Dawnpelt's history, she should probably be made a little older. Anywhere from Twenty to twenty-five moons should be good.