Cloudpaw

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• Name/ Cloudkit Cloudpaw
  
• Gender/ She-cat
  
• Age/ 7 moons old
  
• Rank/ Apprentice
  
• Beliefs/ Cloudpaw was born being told that StarClan lit her path from birth til death, but she never really thought it was necessarily true to put all faith in StarClan. She doesn't always interact with StarClan, because she is often angry with them for letting bad things happen around the forest.
  
  She just recently started receiving dreams from StarClan, telling her unclear prophecies and signs of an upcoming battle. She doesn't understand why, or how StarClan chose her to hear these messages.
  
  
• Clan/ StreamClan
  
• Parents/ Rose (mother- loner- deceased) Volefang (father- clan cat- deceased)
  
• Siblings/ Petal (sister- loner-NP)
  
• Other Kin/ Mint and Fern (nieces- loners-NP)
  
• Mate/ Not yet
  
• Crush/ Mousepaw
  
  
• Kits/ Not yet
  
• Mentor/ Not yet (Needs one)
  
• Appearance/ Cloudpaw is quite a pretty cat, but she has not yet lost her kit fuzz. She has a kit-like figure, so foes often underestimate her. She has rather short legs, and small, dainty paws. Her ears are short and pointed, and her tail is short and puffy. She has deep green eyes, and a dark pink nose. Her fur is pale gray and black tabby stripes. She is often described as shout and stout, but she is well-muscled for her age. Her fluffy pelt often hides her muscles, so many cats often think she is weak. Her claws are thorn-sharp, and quite long. Her pads get scratched up very quickly, because of the soft, squishy surface. You will often see her limping because of sore paws.
  
  
• Personality/ She can be quite grumpy sometimes, especially if someone has just made fun of her kit fuzz. But she also sometimes finds an inner disturbance when cats tease her, like she knows she's different; but she doesn't understand if that's good or bad. She can be short-tempered, and will set of at the "smallest" mean comment about her. But if you get to her good side, she'll most likely be fond of you, no matter what you do. If she likes you, she likes you.
  Under all of her "temper problems" she can be a very sweet, kindhearted cat. She will help any friend out when in need, even if it means breaking the warrior code. But don't try to fool her, you'll end up regretting that with a slash mark on your face!
  Cloudpaw has never been fond of the medicine cat's den, mostly because she hates being told what to do. Even though that's where she will be found most because of her delicate paws, it's the last place she would like to be.
  
  
  
• Skills/ She is very well-rounded. She can hunt, jump, and attack very averagely. She has always acceded in running and sneaking around without being scented at all.
  
  
• History/ Cloudpaw was always just an average kit- no special talents, no beautiful qualities, just average. Cloudpaw hated being told she was "cute" or "weak". After being apprenticed, she started to feel a rock in her stomach when somebody insulted or teased her. If it went too far over the edge, the rock would turn to pure ice and shoot through her veins. Then she would become violent and usually attack the cat who insulted her- this means she would get in trouble often, and she did. She was always being sent to the Elder's den to kill ticks, get fresh moss, or just to stay out of the way of the "more qualified" apprentices. Every cat thought that she was just a mouse-brained aggressive apprentice who had temper problems even Mousepaw- whom was the only cat she actually liked in the Clan. But she often gets very sensitive and lonely, and will try to speak to her deceased father- Volefang in her dreams. When she rarely sees him he will ignore her because of his rage for leaving his mate to die alone. This makes her feel even more terrible and tends to take it out on clanmates. Cloudpaw is in desperate need of a caring clanmate to take her in as their daughter- or just to be loved by someone who will listen to her problems and comfort her worries.
  

[Whiskers]

Beliefs: ...have you gotten permission for Cloudpaw to recieve dreams from Starclan? You're not allowed to simply insert this trait, so you'll have to change it if you don't have permission.

Personality: She doesn't have much depth to her. She sounds just like a lot of other cats. "She's nice but watch out, she can bite!" I want to see some variety. What makes her a unique cat?

And I'm extremely confused. Is she a meddie cat? Is she a regular apprentice? If she's a medicine cat apprentice you'll have to apply in the rankings board. And her position will most likely affect the rest of her character.