Post by Nightfall on Apr 9, 2009 15:56:42 GMT -5
Alright, so I've made the intro to mah story. I'll be working on the first chapter over Easter and I'm hoping I'll have it up by next week. Probably not, but oh well. I will be posting all the chapters of my story on FoF, just to let you know. Please read it and tell me what you think of it!
Angels in Flight: Wars
Prologue
A cold wind swept through the barren trees, causing the young small figure in the clearing to shiver uncontrollably. He wrapped his dark cloak around him tightly, swinging his head from left to right wildly like an animal.
"Pitiful. This is the demon they send me?" a voice hissed from the shadows, making the small boy jump.
"I-Is that you, my lord?" The boy stuttered, afraid.
The demon nodded. "I am Lucifer, son of the King. You have information for me, Joel, am I correct?"
Joel nodded, his fear and anxiousness replaced by excitement. "The general of the army says that phase one can begin. Our spies have found four angels suitable for our plan. They will be in position tomorrow at 6 o'clock."
Lucifer smiled, showing his long white teeth. "And who will push them off? Surely not I. I cannot enter that... place without being burned, and none of the spies will be there. They will all be at the recruitment center.
You will have to go."
Joel squeaked. "M-Me?" He whimpered. Lucifer nodded.
"Yes, you. You are perfect. Perhaps if you complete this mission, you will be awarded with a raise of rank."
Joel shook uncontrollably. "Of course I will, my lord!" he nearly shouted.
Lucifer rubbed his hands together, imagining what may happen if this plan goes through. He pointed to a portal of darkness. "Go. There will be a spy there to take you to that... place" He spat. "When you get there. Make sure you push them off at exactly 6 o'clock. Any later or any earlier will not do. Now go." He hissed, and pushed the young demon into the portal.
Lucifer gazed up at the red sky, knowing his plan would work. The demons would overthrow the human and angel population, make them their slaves, and become ruler of all.
That was the night our young heroes' adventures began.
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Chap. 1
“Come on Squall, you’re ruining the fun! Just join us!” Was a young angel’s shout from her place in the air with her brother. Her name was Zoey Night.
“I don’t want to. It’s meaningless. If we’re not going to see each other for a while, what’s the point of prolonging the agony?” Came the annoyed reply.
This annoyed person was Squall Archer, one of the most difficult guys in Heaven. He sighed and crossed his arms.
“Please?” Said another angel in the sky with his sister, who went by the name Ventus Night, or Ven.
Squall sighed again. “No.”
“Please?”
“No.”
“Please?”
“No.”
“Pretty please with a cherry on top?” Said the final angel, named Sora Licht.
“NO!”
“Please!?” All three voices joined in.
“Man, you’re outnumbered three to one. It’s best to give up.” Someone said behind Ven, who was in the air and fell when the person spoke. He landed with a thump and got up glaring at the person who had scared him.
“Leo!”
The angel grinned, very amused. He flew over to Zoey, who was still laughing at her brother’s act, and handed her an envelope.
“This is for all four of you. The security team has already read it, and it says someone wants to meet you at Highest Peak at 6 o’clock.”
Zoey felt slightly curious “Why?”
Leo shrugged. “I dunno. It wasn’t signed.”
Zoey turned to look at the others, then checked her watch. 5:30. “Oh dang! If we’re going to meet with whoever person at Highest Peak, then we have to go now!”
She turned around and flew off towards Highest Peak. Ventus turned to watch as she flew off, then flared his wings and followed her.
Sora took off excitedly, and Squall simply facepalmed and followed the three other angels muttering about ‘Too stupid to realize its some kind of trick’.
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Sorry, that is only a preview of chapter 1. I will be working on the rest, and should have the rest up by next week. Someone, please read and REVIEW it!
Angels in Flight: Wars
Prologue
A cold wind swept through the barren trees, causing the young small figure in the clearing to shiver uncontrollably. He wrapped his dark cloak around him tightly, swinging his head from left to right wildly like an animal.
"Pitiful. This is the demon they send me?" a voice hissed from the shadows, making the small boy jump.
"I-Is that you, my lord?" The boy stuttered, afraid.
The demon nodded. "I am Lucifer, son of the King. You have information for me, Joel, am I correct?"
Joel nodded, his fear and anxiousness replaced by excitement. "The general of the army says that phase one can begin. Our spies have found four angels suitable for our plan. They will be in position tomorrow at 6 o'clock."
Lucifer smiled, showing his long white teeth. "And who will push them off? Surely not I. I cannot enter that... place without being burned, and none of the spies will be there. They will all be at the recruitment center.
You will have to go."
Joel squeaked. "M-Me?" He whimpered. Lucifer nodded.
"Yes, you. You are perfect. Perhaps if you complete this mission, you will be awarded with a raise of rank."
Joel shook uncontrollably. "Of course I will, my lord!" he nearly shouted.
Lucifer rubbed his hands together, imagining what may happen if this plan goes through. He pointed to a portal of darkness. "Go. There will be a spy there to take you to that... place" He spat. "When you get there. Make sure you push them off at exactly 6 o'clock. Any later or any earlier will not do. Now go." He hissed, and pushed the young demon into the portal.
Lucifer gazed up at the red sky, knowing his plan would work. The demons would overthrow the human and angel population, make them their slaves, and become ruler of all.
That was the night our young heroes' adventures began.
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Chap. 1
“Come on Squall, you’re ruining the fun! Just join us!” Was a young angel’s shout from her place in the air with her brother. Her name was Zoey Night.
“I don’t want to. It’s meaningless. If we’re not going to see each other for a while, what’s the point of prolonging the agony?” Came the annoyed reply.
This annoyed person was Squall Archer, one of the most difficult guys in Heaven. He sighed and crossed his arms.
“Please?” Said another angel in the sky with his sister, who went by the name Ventus Night, or Ven.
Squall sighed again. “No.”
“Please?”
“No.”
“Please?”
“No.”
“Pretty please with a cherry on top?” Said the final angel, named Sora Licht.
“NO!”
“Please!?” All three voices joined in.
“Man, you’re outnumbered three to one. It’s best to give up.” Someone said behind Ven, who was in the air and fell when the person spoke. He landed with a thump and got up glaring at the person who had scared him.
“Leo!”
The angel grinned, very amused. He flew over to Zoey, who was still laughing at her brother’s act, and handed her an envelope.
“This is for all four of you. The security team has already read it, and it says someone wants to meet you at Highest Peak at 6 o’clock.”
Zoey felt slightly curious “Why?”
Leo shrugged. “I dunno. It wasn’t signed.”
Zoey turned to look at the others, then checked her watch. 5:30. “Oh dang! If we’re going to meet with whoever person at Highest Peak, then we have to go now!”
She turned around and flew off towards Highest Peak. Ventus turned to watch as she flew off, then flared his wings and followed her.
Sora took off excitedly, and Squall simply facepalmed and followed the three other angels muttering about ‘Too stupid to realize its some kind of trick’.
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Sorry, that is only a preview of chapter 1. I will be working on the rest, and should have the rest up by next week. Someone, please read and REVIEW it!
We have a cbox again and we're opening the place up as a closed, members only rp