[ Lost your self-esstem along the way ] Gladepaw

[ulysses]

Name | Gladepaw

Gender | she-cat

Age | 13

Rank | apprentice

Clan | Fog

Beliefs| Gladepaw is a strong believe in the starclan ways, but not as strong as her parents want her to be. Growing up the ways of startclan were roughly shoved in her face by her nursemaids, kin and others, all strong believer's in Mistpelt's plans. She is too young, and too uninterested in the clan's 'belief' affair.

Parents |
Mother : Barkclaw
Father : Russetpelt

Siblings |
Brother : Riverpaw

Other Kin | none

Mate | notyet

Crush | notyet

Kits | notyet

Apprentice/Mentor | not yet

Appearance | Gladepaws main pelt color is a nice blue tinted silver, very beautiful compared to her kit mate. Dark brownish grey stripes run down as they meet her soft white underbelly. Marks of brown on her ear tips, muzzle tip and tail tip shows that she has some likeness to her brother. She has dark blue eyes, a key trait in her family bloodline. Her built is medium, hidden swimming muscles under her pelt.

Personality | Gladepaw is rather, picky, on who she talks to. Having her parents being strong loyal warriors, she tends to take everything to heart. Rather boastful, and candid, Gladepaw could be classified as 'mean'. The name Gladepaw, matches her personality as well as her pelt. She can be called a con-artist, having excellent skill of sucking up to people(; But she does have some good traits. Gladepaw is fearless, acting and preforming duty's other apprentices would not ever attempt. She will stand up for her beliefs and has a tongue as sharp as a razor. But with being so 'self-centered', Gladepaw tends to believe she is more important then she already is. Even though she is mean, and unforgiving, she would make a strong, loyal warrior of any clan. Her thoughts not clouded by friendship ties.

Skills | Gladepaw's sense of hearing is astounding, able to here a small cry even in the heat of battle. She has trained well and has perfected her skill of agility, her stamina outmatches the most powerful apprentice.

History | Gladepaw was born in the brink of newleaf. Born to two strong Fog clan warrior's, she was of a litter of two. Gladepaw tended to get the most of her parents attention, due to her beauty and outspokenness. Leaving her brother, Riverpaw rather shy and timid. Early in her apprenticeship many of the warrior complimented on her progress, admiring her dedication to the warrior code. She keep's most of her intention on studying, testing her self to the limit. Her true intentions are to become Fogclans most respectful warrior, greedy for the spot as deputy. Her acts of bravery and loyalty are show everyday. Even though Gladepaw's heart lies with the clan she will stop at nothing to reach her goal. Even if that means taking out whoever in her way.

[Whiskers]

Coyotepaw could be classified as 'mean', but no matter how hateful she may be cats cant stop talking to her.-- Not only does this strike me as mary-suish, but it also isn't fair. You can't speak for all the other cats in the clan. You must find a different way to say this-- say that she is charismatic perhaps.

The name Coyotepaw, came not from her appearance, but from her personality-- This is not how we name cats at FoF. Coyote- must have come from her appearance. Instead of saying the above, why not rephrase it to read: "Her name suits her personality as well as her pelt."

Her history does not match the site's main plot. Please read the plot and the timeline as well.

The names Breezepaw, Rustlebreeze, and Whistlefur are all unacceptable at FoF. We only accept traditional names.

I like her though. She has many qualities of a future leader and she sort of reminds me of a young Mistpelt. I will like watching her grow.

[ulysses]

Major name change to : Gladepaw.

1. fixed.

2. personality vs name fixed.

3. History is changed, please tell me how it is (:

4. I have changed the name of kin, if its still not correct what do you recomend D: ? Their are made up.