Angels in Flight: Wars

[Nightfall]

Hey all, I'm planning on making a story called Angels in Flight: Wars, and I need a few more ideas before I start working on it. I have a plot and a few of the characters, but I need a little more. just read it over and give me your feedback on if its good or not and if you have any ideas, just tell me here. Don't PM me, I find that just plain dumb.

Plot- A war between the Angels and the Demons is escalating. When 3 young angels and their guardian fall to Earth, the Demons believe that the Angels are trying to recruit humans to destroy them. Join Zoey, Squall, Ventus and Sora as they face regular teenage challenges and Demons at the same time.

Main Characters-

Zoey (Angel, protagonist)
Squall( Angel, protagonist)
Ventus (Angel, protagonist)
Sora (Angel, protagonist)
Lucifer (Son of the Devil, protagonist)
Joel (Demon, protagonist)

Weapons so far

Swords, bows and arrows, crossbows, magic (Any ideas?)

[pajamas]

How about a staff for a weapon? You know, a long, magical stick.

[Ten]

"they face regular teenage challenges"
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Like what?

I'm not too clear on what the conflict is here.
I'm not even sure what the war is over.

[Deleted]

"Like what?"

-thinks- If Degrassi serves me right...
BOY FRIENDS, DRUGS, SHOOT UPS, PROM, PORN... : D

[Nightfall]

Well Ten, basically they fall from Heaven, land on Earth, are found by other angels living on earth, discover there is probably no way to get beck home, are forced to live like normal human teenagers while the other angels act as their fake parents(They're old enough.. 150 years old and look 25), realize that the demons have an evil plan to destroy all life on earth and heaven with some 'Secret Weapon', and try to stop them. The war is still going on.

[Ten]

"forced to live like normal human teenagers"
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Doesn't sound hard.


"look 25"
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So... they're pretending they had kids at about age ten?


"plan to destroy all life on earth and heaven"
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Mind if I ask what religion this is based off of?


"try to stop them"
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How? Just run at them with pointy objects?


"The war is still going on."
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The war over what?

[pteriforever]

Ten, you would make an excellent moderator. Turn those powers of questioning against some spammy thread, and kapow!!!!!!!