Post by Rolo on Mar 3, 2011 9:38:12 GMT -5
((When replying to this post:
- Please show Owlstar's thought processes clearly.
- Reply as you normally would. We're not expecting a novel. Balance quantity with quality.
- Remember, character is more important than setting or description.
- Reply to every cat that speaks (or at least acknowledge their presence if Owlstar is going to ignore them). ))
After many moons of being constantly on the move, finally Slatewhisker could see an opportunity to settle down. His step decidedly springy, he dashed back towards Owlstar and her followers, his whiskers twitching with excitement. Spotting the group leader, he ran straight towards her and only drew to a halt when he was about a fox length away. Breath quickened, he dipped his head to the former Fogclan leader.
“Owlstar, as requested I have scouted the territory ahead.” He said respectfully, barely able to contain himself, “I have good news. The surroundings ahead are a lot more hospitable than the stuff we've been travelling through. There's the trace scent of a few twolegs here and there, but it's old, and there seem to be no sign of badgers or foxes...” He realised he was rambling and shook his head, “But you don't want to know about that! There's a building there, an old barn of some sort, which smells of foreign cats. I went in to check it out and a rogue told me we were welcome to stay there for a while, because no cat gives a rat tail who lives beside them in there. There are quite a few loners in there, but it's safe, warm and full of mice. We could easily settle down there for a while... or in some of the fields around it, if you think that wiser.”
Slatewhisker felt so dreadfully important, delivering what was perhaps the best news Owlstar had heard for moons. Since their unceremonious kicking out, the group of them had wandered the clan territories looking for somewhere to stay. They had pleaded Cloudstar, one of Owlstar's supposed allies, for shelter during the harsh winter, and Cloudstar had agreed initially, only to go back on his word when the prey got short and Miststar, true to form, suggested they were not to be trusted. On to the twoleg place, where they had wandered the streets for some moons, wondering if there might be a territory to claim beyond all those buildings and twoleg structures. They suffered badly here, their diets made up of what could only be described as strange crowfood rather than fresh-kill, and they'd all decided to turn back rather than get ill from their poor menu or get run over by a monster. They'd stayed on the fringes of the clan land for a bit then, not wishing to leave their true home behind completely, but they'd been driven away by the lack of prey and abundance of predators. With luck, the Ranch would be the sanctuary they all desperately needed, if it was only a brief stop to recharge for a while.
Behind him, a young cat had obviously been listening intently to what he had said. Before he knew it, a flash of silver went past the corner of his eyes, and an apprentice appeared beside him. Mistypaw. Of all the cats to overhear, the most excitable and liberal-jawed cat in their group had heard of his latest discovery.
“A barn! With mice! Yay! I thought we'd be moving around forever! Can we please go there, Owlstar?” She bounced around with such excitement, any stranger would believe her a kit, not an older apprentice, “We can chase those dirty loners out of there and take it for ourselves! For once we'll have something to shelter under. We won't get rained on any more! We'll be full-bellied! And not because we've eaten that yucky crowfood from those silver things! Please, Owlstar! Let's go live there.”
- Please show Owlstar's thought processes clearly.
- Reply as you normally would. We're not expecting a novel. Balance quantity with quality.
- Remember, character is more important than setting or description.
- Reply to every cat that speaks (or at least acknowledge their presence if Owlstar is going to ignore them). ))
After many moons of being constantly on the move, finally Slatewhisker could see an opportunity to settle down. His step decidedly springy, he dashed back towards Owlstar and her followers, his whiskers twitching with excitement. Spotting the group leader, he ran straight towards her and only drew to a halt when he was about a fox length away. Breath quickened, he dipped his head to the former Fogclan leader.
“Owlstar, as requested I have scouted the territory ahead.” He said respectfully, barely able to contain himself, “I have good news. The surroundings ahead are a lot more hospitable than the stuff we've been travelling through. There's the trace scent of a few twolegs here and there, but it's old, and there seem to be no sign of badgers or foxes...” He realised he was rambling and shook his head, “But you don't want to know about that! There's a building there, an old barn of some sort, which smells of foreign cats. I went in to check it out and a rogue told me we were welcome to stay there for a while, because no cat gives a rat tail who lives beside them in there. There are quite a few loners in there, but it's safe, warm and full of mice. We could easily settle down there for a while... or in some of the fields around it, if you think that wiser.”
Slatewhisker felt so dreadfully important, delivering what was perhaps the best news Owlstar had heard for moons. Since their unceremonious kicking out, the group of them had wandered the clan territories looking for somewhere to stay. They had pleaded Cloudstar, one of Owlstar's supposed allies, for shelter during the harsh winter, and Cloudstar had agreed initially, only to go back on his word when the prey got short and Miststar, true to form, suggested they were not to be trusted. On to the twoleg place, where they had wandered the streets for some moons, wondering if there might be a territory to claim beyond all those buildings and twoleg structures. They suffered badly here, their diets made up of what could only be described as strange crowfood rather than fresh-kill, and they'd all decided to turn back rather than get ill from their poor menu or get run over by a monster. They'd stayed on the fringes of the clan land for a bit then, not wishing to leave their true home behind completely, but they'd been driven away by the lack of prey and abundance of predators. With luck, the Ranch would be the sanctuary they all desperately needed, if it was only a brief stop to recharge for a while.
Behind him, a young cat had obviously been listening intently to what he had said. Before he knew it, a flash of silver went past the corner of his eyes, and an apprentice appeared beside him. Mistypaw. Of all the cats to overhear, the most excitable and liberal-jawed cat in their group had heard of his latest discovery.
“A barn! With mice! Yay! I thought we'd be moving around forever! Can we please go there, Owlstar?” She bounced around with such excitement, any stranger would believe her a kit, not an older apprentice, “We can chase those dirty loners out of there and take it for ourselves! For once we'll have something to shelter under. We won't get rained on any more! We'll be full-bellied! And not because we've eaten that yucky crowfood from those silver things! Please, Owlstar! Let's go live there.”