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[Cloud of Diamonds]

My scanner should be up and running in a few weeks. ?

In the meantime, here's a poemy verse thingy...

Making Our Way

Did anyone ever tell you
That you couldn't get off the ground?
Did they ever ask you why you never went further than your front door?
Did they ever mock and sneer and laugh so cruelly
While you stood silently, or in rage.
Well, now I'll tell you something.
You don't need wings to fly, oh no, you don't need wings to fly.
You can climb up to the sky by your own way.
The ones who are truly earthbound
Are the ones who cannot see how everything has its place.
Their horizons will never widen, and their eyes shall not open.
Not soon, anyway.
For chains that are not made of metal are often the strongest.
It's often hardest to break the bonds we create for ourselves.
There's so many ways to not be a fool;
Just follow one golden rule
And that is to never assume.
So I've spread my wings and I've learned how to fly;
Haven't done it much, but at least I have tried.
But gliding is better for me,
becuase it means I can make my own way at a more gradual pace.

So you can too.
Or more likely, you already do.

<o>

And a song...

I Am the Warrior (by me)

I am the warrior, I am the fighter.

I dream in earth, I breathe in fire, I dive in water, I am a sky flier.

I am the warrior, I am the fighter.

I am the music that rides on wind, I am the breeze that blows the clouds.

I am the warrior, I am the fighter.

I am the hawk, the jay, the swan,
I am the eagle who flies on,
I am the fawn who leaps in night,
I am the owl's darkest flight.

I am the warrior, I am the fighter.

I am winter, fall, and spring,
I can breathe and I can sing,
I am sunshine, I am dark,
I am dawn and song of lark.

I am the warrior, I am the fighter.

SO YEAH. It doesn't make sense, I know. ><

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AND SO...the next EXCITING installation of Wolf's Eclipse mockage thingie! Whoot! -_-

Chapter 3, Part 1
“He cleared the gorge in one easy jump, landing on the ridge beyond. His claws scraped the rock, holding his paws firm. He leaped again, light as air, the breath hardly stirring in his chest. His tail seemed to brush the pelt-soft sky and, with the blood rushing in his ears, he lifted his chin and yowled, his voice echoing like thunder around the empty mountains. I have the power of the stars in my paws!”

Or you’re really huge, deny the laws of physics, and are on kitty steroids. Just a thought.

“And neither of them had asked about his journey to the mountains. He stared angrily around the camp. No cat seemed the slightest bit interested in his return.”

My, aren’t we a bit self-centered? Did you expect everyone to clamor around you and beg at your paws for details? Lionpaw, as much as you may wish it you are not the center of Erinland. At least not yet.

“Or did she think their matching snow-colored pelts would scare away all the prey as soon as they set foot under the trees?”

Then why even bother going out if you’re like a great big danger sign? Or two? Though I don’t think the prey is just going to automatically run away from them. If that were true, they’d run away from snow too. Or maybe I’m imagining things.

“It took me ages to get it right”

Didn’t Sir Gary Stu catch a vole on his first day as an apprentice? I would not call maybe an hour or two ages. Maybe his conception of time is screwed up, it would not surprise me.
“Looking down at Icepaw’s glowing eyes, Lionpaw felt as if he were being asked to give up an entire way of life—and one that suited him very well.”

How do her eyes remind you of the Uber Speshul Prophecy? What is the connection here? I’m not seeing it, whatever it is.

“Icepaw padded beside him, her small catch tripping her as she tried to match his pace. “I wish my legs weren’t so short” she complained, her words muffled by vole fur.”

Icepaw must be one short cat, if a vole can trip her up. The vole is about, what, two inches long and one inch thick or so? The book specifically states it’s a small vole. Even a cat a little over six moons can carry a vole and not trip. So either Icepaw is about six inches tall, or that vole is genetically mutated and huge and the cats’ size perception is way off.

“Icepaw lifted her chin. “I got it first try!””

How in logic’s name would you have had a second try? If you’d missed, the vole would have bolted down its hole, not wait around for you to try again, Icepaw honey dearest.

““No cat must know! Not when we don’t know exactly what this prophecy means.””

Oh mah gosh, they’re totally going to read you the riot act if you don’t know exactly what this huge mysterious prophecy means. No, they aren’t. Hollypaw, I think you’re just a little bit paranoid/obsessive about this.

“Icepaw was trotting from the fresh-kill pile with her little vole swinging from her jaws.”

Hang on a moment-weren’t we just told she couldn’t walk with it without tripping? Or did Icepaw randomly have a lightning-fast growth spurt? Or did the vole shrink? It’s a mystery.

“Lionpaw watched his brother. He seemed completely different from the resentful young cat who had never wanted to be a medicine cat’s apprentice. And yet he’s more powerful than any of his Clanmates."

Yo, he’s had three full books to develop. Dontcha think he might have changed a bit? And Lionpaw, no, he’s not really more powerful than you. You’re a member of the prophecy just like he is. You are his equal. –headdesk-

“Would the frustration gnawing in his own belly cease with time, once he’d gotten used to the prophecy, as Jaypaw had done?”
Probably. Don’t see why you’re upset anyway. Thought you liked this whole shebang, being uber powerful and all.

““Isn’t he going to mention how I fought?” he hissed under his breath.”

Yeah, you and the other two apprentices who fought, remember? But since you’re so self-centered you think he’s obviously going to mention your super amazing skills because of course you are Just That Special.

[[ hardyrex ]]

This is amazing, Wolf. |D

I should do this too. Make a list of books and let people see which one I want to do ~

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I call Eclipse, Outcast, and Long Shadows. Those are the ones I'm going to do.

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Chapter 3, Part 2
““Cloudtail found a hive in a hollow trunk while we were patrolling near the abandoned Twolegplace,” Cinderpaw explained. “He managed to get his paw in and grab a chunk of honeycomb.” Did he get stung?” Foxpaw mewed. “Only once.”

I find it difficult to believe he only got stung once, sticking his paw into a beehive.

“One day all the honey in the forest would be his.”

And this is important why? He’s not a medicine cat, last time I checked. Unless he and Jaypaw switched bodies or something. Unless he’s planning to out and eat it all. Which I don’t think he is.

““Not joining in with the honey feast?” Lionpaw whispered. “Let them enjoy it,” he whispered back. Suddenly feeling less alone, Lionpaw closed his eyes and slipped into sleep.”

So now they’re shunning their denmates because they aren’t ultra powerful and aloof like them? Ladies and gentlemen, we have found our Snobby Cat of the Year gold medal winners.

““We’re not concerned with past battles,” Tigerstar mewed briskly. “Only battles to come.” Lionpaw narrowed his eyes. This sounded like an excuse to him. They couldn’t see me in the mountains!”

……somebody shoot him. He makes a big deal out of what Tigerstar says, which happens to be perfectly logical. He’s probably just worried about this because if they didn’t see him they won’t be able to fall over in their race to adore him, like he thinks they should. e-e

““But don’t you want to hear about the mountain cats?” Tigerstar lashed his tail. “They’re no concern of mine.” He’s not interested!”

I wouldn’t be interested either. Maybe because I’ve read the book, but maybe because Lionpaw is such a jerk I don’t give a crap.

“Well, he certainly didn’t know everything about Lionpaw.”

Is Tigerstar supposed to? I don’t think you want him stalking you. But Idk.

[skyy]

I love the image of Willowkit, Crowkit, and Elmkit. ^^

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Why thank you. o3o

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And another one.

Chapter 4
“He turned and dashed towards the den entrance as Daisy raced in. He smelled fear on her pelt and the lash of a flailing paw as she hurried past him.”

Um….how did you not bonk heads cartoon style and fall over with x’d-out eyes and little stars floating around your heads? It’s a small medicine cave.

“He was chasing a bee and jumped straight into the nettle patch,” Daisy panted after setting down Toadkit.”

That is one dumb kit, if he can’t see he’s about to jump into a fricking nettle patch.

“…Jaypaw tripped over her tail. He stumbled to a clumsy halt at the store entrance..”

Jaypaw, tripping means you FALL OVER. Comprende?

““Thanks, Jaypaw.” Toadkit’s grateful mew took him by surprise.”

Because you’re never grateful yourself?

“But the coltsfoot in her paws grew more fragrant, as though her pads were twitching with unease.”

Uh….how would her pads twitching make the herb more fragrant? Unless Leafpool’s pads are made of coltsfoot, and her twitching them wafts the scent like perfume. But that would make it difficult to walk, methinks.

““But they didn’t try to help the Tribe beat the invaders.”

He’s talking about the Tribe of Endless Hunting, and how may I ask are they supposed to help when they’re DEAD, Jaypaw dearest? Will they blind the invaders with their awesome shininess? –thinks of Edward Cullen the disco ball-

“Yet she had sounded so bright when talking to Cloudtail. Unnaturally bright, as though covering doubt.”

What. The. Heck. Leafpool just told Cloudtail that Cinderpaw was definitely ready for her final assessment. If Leafpool really cared about Cinderpaw, she would’ve checked on her (healed from being broken) leg. But NO, she has to be all, “Cinderpaw will follow her DESTINEEE.” Uh-huh. Leafpool’s just so caring and sweet.

[glowlynose]

OMG. CROWKIT IN AN ARTISTIC INTERPRETATION! 8DDDDD
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I'm an appreciated artist. -egoboost- Though I promise to not get a big head about it.